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It was a normal day for Anne and Kelly, who were laying about in Kelly鈥檚 bedroom, rather bored, for they had nothing to do. They had offered to clean up the neighbor-

hood, but their mothers had refused, seeing the hot weath-

er was rather....well, hot. Considering anything besides going outside, their list was rather short. 鈥?What can we do?鈥?cried Kelly. 鈥?Could we IM Jane, Matt , Sandy, and

Lina at the same time? That would be fun.鈥?suggested A-

nne. 鈥淥kay 鈥?said Kelly, getting up. 鈥?No need.鈥?said a

voice behind them. They turned around, to find Sandy,

Jane, Matt, and Lina waiting for them. Kelly groaned loudly鈥撯€撯€?she really wanted to IM them, not meet them.

鈥?Hey. What鈥檚 up?鈥?asked Sandy, a tall, broad shouldered,

blond haired guy, who was the founder of six kids

so-called 鈥済roup鈥? They never even met during the school year. Now, seeing it was summer, they met each other frequently, every other day. 鈥淣othing. You?鈥?replied Anne. 鈥淲e were goin鈥?to that woods behind Rain Orchids.鈥?said Lina. 鈥淭hey鈥撯€斺€?she pointed to the guys--- 鈥?claim there is a haunted house. Smack in the middle of the woods. A haunted house. In the woods 鈥漵he said, exclaiming it loudly. 鈥?Yeah, right, we believe you, you鈥檙e down right we do,鈥?said Kelly, though she looked like she was interested. 鈥?Hmmm... there was something, uh, never mind.鈥?said Jane, who was really thoughtful and curious about things like that. 鈥?No, go on We wanna listen, don鈥檛 we?鈥漵aid Kelly quickly. There were murmurs and nods of agreement. 鈥淲ell, if you want to know, there was a house