Who can relate to this poem I wrote? And what you think about it?
2008-2-29 21:24:00 by Skinskin
Nightmares
Submerged in a pool of someone else control
They鈥檙e taken my emotions and imprisoned my soul
Forgetting my identity I 芒m mechanical from head to toe
Waking up in a cold sweat and afraid of my own shadow
NIGHTMARES!!
F**kin NIGHTMARES!!
Another life that lives in my subconscious mind
One that keeping me awake with the silence of the night
Visions of disorder flowing through my brain
Having to convince myself I 芒m not going insane
by ISABEL
Who can relate to this poem I wrote? And what you think about it?I love your poem, it is very thought provoking. If its any help YOU are sane ...only the truly sane will question their own sanity ,the insane never consider their own madness!! keep up the good writing...
Who can relate to this poem I wrote? And what you think about it?It's not really like a poem, sort of like a paragraph
Who can relate to this poem I wrote? And what you think about it?It is good and well thought out but you must work on your grammar a bit. Good Luck!
Who can relate to this poem I wrote? And what you think about it?it's really good. i can't relate, but it's really an excellent poem.
Who can relate to this poem I wrote? And what you think about it?wow i llove it it is it reminds my of the book blue is for mightmares , and my sisters depressing peoms, but i really do like it